Wrongness redux

[louiselux]

Because emungere made me? Okay, that excuse isn't really working anymore, is it.



After reading the adventures of Goku and Nyoi-Bo, Goku retreated into his corner of the jeep, wide eyed and somewhat pale, even going so far as to refuse Hakkai's offer of an apple.

'Oh, get over it,' Sanzo muttered eventually, his legs tightly crossed. 'Although it sounds like that's exactly what you did,' he added under his breath and with a nasty smirk.

'An anatomy lesson from that man is hardly the best sort of sex education,' Hakkai said. He was taking great pains not to touch Jeep's gear stick any more than he absolutely had to

'Well, I'll just look after these then,' Gojyo murmured, sneaking the folder of papers under his jacket. He was keen to review chapter 74, 'A Boy and His Weapon', which involved a flashback to Sanzo's teenage years and dwelt on the exact nature of his relationship with his gun, which Ni Jianyi had detailed at some length and with lashings of gun oil. And diagrams.

Gojyo had always suspected as much, frankly. He just hoped Sanzo cleaned the damn thing afterwards.

Comments

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Ah. The one that sucks might well be the I read - certain things in it made me want to poke my eyes out.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

You might not like the one I recced either, it wasn't the best thing I'd ever read, but it was a damn step up from the horrible, horrible one I'd read months before.