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I've been a bit glacial with these so far, sorry, but tada!


Hakkai & Sanzo and laundry for [livejournal.com profile] samsarapine



"Everything's covered in blood," said Hakkai. He smiled, aware of Sanzo at his shoulder, silent and smelling bad. It had been such a nasty fight, especially for the losers. "I'm afraid."

The laundry woman peeped into the plastic bag stuffed with Sanzo's robes, hooking it open with the tip of one stumpy finger.

"Meh," she said. "What are you, butchers? It's going to be extra for the stain remover."

"We can pay," Hakkai. "Do you take credit cards?" He had it in his hand waiting. Sanzo had handed it over without a word.

"Meh," she said again, and stooped to dig around under the counter, pulling out a card swiping machine. She had eyes like chips of shiny coal pressed into dumpling dough. They fixed on Hakkai's limiters. "Don't see 'em too often. Right, this lot'll take a couple of hours."

"I want tea," Sanzo muttered. "If we're waiting."

"There's a vending machine round the back," she said.

"You're very kind," Hakkai said. Sanzo merely sighed.

Hakkai fetched the tea. They settled side by side on the hard benches and watched the great drums spin. Their clothes tumbled and sloshed in the machines. The shop was filled with their low growl.

It was warm, and the air smelled clean and fragrant with soap. Soon, Sanzo was making soft snoring sounds. He slumped, propped lightly against Hakkai's shoulder. His feet were bare - even his socks had been bloody. Hakkai sipped his tea and closed his eyes. It was good to relax for a few minutes.

"Thank you for helping me," Hakkai said, although Sanzo said nothing. "I know it's probably because of the socks, but you didn't have to come."

Sanzo snored a little louder. Hakkai smiled, and settled back on the bench to wait.


Sanzo and epic tight pants for [livejournal.com profile] puddingcat



"Holy shit," Gojyo swore, under his breath. He bit down on his cigarette, sucking in a lungful of smoke, staring over Hakkai's left shoulder at Sanzo, who had come in from the baths.

Hakkai smiled to his hand of cards, then place two queens down on the table in front of him. "Is he wearing something becoming?" he said.

Gojyo liked the way Hakkai disguised his voice, as if he were nagging Gojyo about ashtrays. He talked a lot like that.

"Oh yeah," Gojyo said. Sanzo's jeans clung to every slender curve of his thighs and his ass. He was bending over, digging in his pack. They pulled down at the back, showing the hollow of his spine and the smooth plane of skin just below it. "They couldn't get any tighter."

"Oh, I don't know," Hakkai said, catching his gaze. He touched Gojyo's thigh under the table, curving his palm around it. He smiled again, showing teeth. "Anything's possible. I could put them on another hot wash."


Nii/Koumyou - tenderness and grace, for [livejournal.com profile] 2metaldog



"The moon is so bright tonight that I can see colours," Koumyou said. His gaze drifted from Nii's eyes to his lips. "Pink, especially." He smiled. "You were a beautiful young man."

"Are you saying I've gone off now I'm older?"

Koumyou's laugh was full of light. He ran his hand over Nii's chest. It felt heavy. "Aha. No. Just, you know." He sounded so sweet and blushing. It was all an act. "Young men are so nice and... tight."

"Try me."

"I shall, thank you."

Koumyou was warm, weighted against him in his wide bed. His hair, falling down around them, smelled of the cut price shampoo he insisted was better than more expensive brands. His mouth was soft, his tongue driving and hungry, his body hard and powerful, his mind inscrutable. That was almost the best bit.

Through walls four feet thick, the thrum of Hyakougan Maoh's life support system was barely audible. Somewhere, it was a late summer night, rich with the fragrance of night flowers and earth warmed by the sun all day. The air was colder and deader in the lower levels of Houtou. Somewhere, in some other place, crickets were chirping.

"You're not here," Nii said, to the shade on his chest.

There was no answer, of course. He would have to leave him room and walk upstairs to glimpse the moon.

Date: 2009-08-24 07:48 pm (UTC)
scribblemoose: image of moose with pen and paper (saiyuki group)
From: [personal profile] scribblemoose
OoOh, so good. The last one sent a shiver down my spine.

So good to see your Saiyuki again. *beams*

Date: 2009-08-26 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-08-24 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedishampoo.livejournal.com
They are all three lovely; I loved the laundry woman in the first and Koymyou's teasing in the third, but Sanzo's tight pants and Hakkai and Gojyo's culpability and admiration of it? Fabulous! :)

Date: 2009-08-26 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Yay, thank you!

Date: 2009-08-25 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsarapine.livejournal.com
Thank you again for mine. It's perfect.

The Hakkai/Gojyo dynamics were hilarious in the second story, but that last one - you broke my heart with Nii. What a lovely fic!

Date: 2009-08-26 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-08-25 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cicer.livejournal.com
Bwahaha! The second one! Hakkai is so devious. And such a perv.

The first one is sweet, and the third is unexpectedly sad. Sometimes I feel very sorry for Nii, despite his crazy sociopathic-ness.

I missed your Saiyuki fic terribly! It's nice to see it again.

Date: 2009-08-26 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you. Hakkai= devious perv. Why is this so believable? It just is.

Date: 2009-08-25 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-ganesh.livejournal.com
Oh, that last one!

They're all good of course. Hakkai putting Sanzo's jeans in the hot wash is total win.

Date: 2009-08-26 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-08-25 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com
ohhh that last one! *DIES* ...and and I took a pic of a frog here (http://pics.livejournal.com/i_am_zan/pic/00079cgc) and I thought of you. I saw Federer on the sports news and I thought of you and wondered how you were.

*hugs* - have missed you! ^__^ Hope things are ok with you! ^_^

Date: 2009-08-26 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! Cutie frog! He's nice. He looks like he's about to climb up that mountain of fabric.

I haven't been posting much - I don't know why really. Just feeling a bit meh I suppose.

Date: 2009-08-25 12:19 pm (UTC)
indelicateink: Hakkai giggle (saiyuki hakkai giggle)
From: [personal profile] indelicateink
Oh yay, Saiyuki! These are terrific. (*g* --especially love devious Hakkai and the epic tight pants)

Date: 2009-08-26 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2009-08-25 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-zook.livejournal.com
I ... really don't know which one would be the best. But I don't have to choose anyway, so I'll just drop a gentle 'thank you for writing these' in front of your throne of fandom and try a demure courtsey. <3

Date: 2009-08-26 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hehe! Okay. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2009-08-26 05:24 am (UTC)
ext_15708: (Hakkai - old school)
From: [identity profile] kanzenhanzai.livejournal.com
I almost forgot I'd marked this 'to read!' *smacks self* Each of these is such a joy <3 I've missed reading your Saiyuki.

Date: 2009-08-26 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
:D Thank you!

Date: 2009-08-27 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cephy.livejournal.com
Oooh, lovely lovely. XD

Date: 2009-08-27 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystalusagi.livejournal.com
That last one was really, really fantastic. The others were as well, in a completely different direction. Thanks for all three =)

(btw, am going to friend you to make it easier to keep up with fic and stuff. please don't be alarmed XD)

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