Saiyuki fic - Bets laid, Hakkai/Gojyo, NC 17

[louiselux]

I wrote some comment porn for Telesilla's porn battle:

Bets laid, Hakkai/Gojyo, NC 17 for the prompt 'bets gone wrong'

Comments

[giving-ground.livejournal.com]

Oh. Hot. Love the emotions, too, and Gojyo's thoughts, and I think the best damn thing about your porn is how much I can believe in the characters.

[mendax.livejournal.com]

I love how abrupt and clumsy and lovely this is. The floodgate feeling of it, with the restrained, surreptitious beginning, and then this creaking, crushing pressure, and then just whoosh! ♥ The image of them ducking into the dark woods just off the road is incredibly hot. But I think my favorite part might have been the why didn't we do this before? and how happy Hakkai sounds there. Yay.

[lauand.livejournal.com]

Mmm, yes! Another awesome piece of porn. I think I could never get tired of reading your writing, always weaving the hottest sex with the most credible, intense emotions.

Loved Gojyo's reasonings, by the way.

[eyesofshinigami.livejournal.com]

Very hot! That was awesome! *squees* I loved it. ♥

And it is your fault that I saw that prompt list, and was smacked by a plot bunny. Which, of course, will be blamed entirely on you. >_>

[thewriter0.livejournal.com]

That made me so happy. I love how your porn's never just porn; it's not just about the unf unf (although that's always delicious and hottastic, too), it's about what everyone is thinking and doing, and what they're saying and what they're not saying, and overall what all of it makes them feel. That, above all, is what makes your stuff so good.