Saiyuki fic - Bets laid, Hakkai/Gojyo, NC 17

[louiselux]

I wrote some comment porn for Telesilla's porn battle:

Bets laid, Hakkai/Gojyo, NC 17 for the prompt 'bets gone wrong'

Comments

[mendax.livejournal.com]

I love how abrupt and clumsy and lovely this is. The floodgate feeling of it, with the restrained, surreptitious beginning, and then this creaking, crushing pressure, and then just whoosh! ♥ The image of them ducking into the dark woods just off the road is incredibly hot. But I think my favorite part might have been the why didn't we do this before? and how happy Hakkai sounds there. Yay.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it, seriously. Your feedback really is so useful and happy making!