Saiyuki fic - Written on the Skin, Gojyo/Hakkai, NC-17

[louiselux]

Here's a fic wot I wrote with the wonderful emungere, although to be honest she did quite a bit more of it than me.

Title: Written on the Skin
Authors: emungere and louiselux
Pairing: Gojyo/Hakkai
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Even a Worm, chapters 18 and 19.

Written on the Skin

Comments

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Ooh, it's lovely! The two of you did a wonderful job - sweet, and funny, and very hot - and very much in character. That Gojyo would want to mark himself as Hakkai's and that he is so afraid of Hakkai's reaction made me ache for him a little, and the cleaning and the battling over the shirt was just cute. :-)

Hakkai not-so-subtly trying to get Gojyo to take his shirt of (matching Gojyo for subtlety, there) made me crack up. A match made in heaven. ;-)

Also... intriguing idea with Hakkai's vines climbing over onto Gojyo!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thsnk so much! The cross posted feedback is very much appreciated. :) Much of the adorableness is attributable to Emungere, I must point out. She's amazingly good at that sort of thing, and getting the characters down just right.

I don't know if you've read the latest chapters of Even a Worm, but the vine idea comes from there *is vague to avoid spoiling you too much*.