Saiyuki fic - Written on the Skin, Gojyo/Hakkai, NC-17

[louiselux]

Here's a fic wot I wrote with the wonderful emungere, although to be honest she did quite a bit more of it than me.

Title: Written on the Skin
Authors: emungere and louiselux
Pairing: Gojyo/Hakkai
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Even a Worm, chapters 18 and 19.

Written on the Skin

Comments

[wedjateye.livejournal.com]

I commented on emungere's LJ, but thought I'd say how much I loved this fic here too.

And add that I loved Hakkai's thoughtfulness in icing the tea before spilling it all over Gojyo's shirt. Gojyo needed to take off running before Hakkai ever returned home to have any hope of avoiding exposure. Even then, I'm sure Hakkai would have hunted him down - and either way, Gojyo would have ended up pleased with the outcome.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! The 'accidental' spilling of iced tea was all emungere's idea and I agree, it's totally wonderful.

[mainekosama.livejournal.com]

Compliments to you, too. You really did a great job with this.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[rheasilvia.livejournal.com]

Ooh, it's lovely! The two of you did a wonderful job - sweet, and funny, and very hot - and very much in character. That Gojyo would want to mark himself as Hakkai's and that he is so afraid of Hakkai's reaction made me ache for him a little, and the cleaning and the battling over the shirt was just cute. :-)

Hakkai not-so-subtly trying to get Gojyo to take his shirt of (matching Gojyo for subtlety, there) made me crack up. A match made in heaven. ;-)

Also... intriguing idea with Hakkai's vines climbing over onto Gojyo!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thsnk so much! The cross posted feedback is very much appreciated. :) Much of the adorableness is attributable to Emungere, I must point out. She's amazingly good at that sort of thing, and getting the characters down just right.

I don't know if you've read the latest chapters of Even a Worm, but the vine idea comes from there *is vague to avoid spoiling you too much*.

[everstar3.livejournal.com]

I wish so badly I could draw: I would totally draw Gojyo wearing Hakkai's vines. Maybe both of them, bound together at the hand with Hakkai's vines. Damn.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

That would be very pretty. And hot. Mmmm.

[baka-gaijin.livejournal.com]

~ fans self ~

~ opens window ~

Is it just me, or is really hot in here?

~ retreats to cold shower ~

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thanks very much - I'm glad it had that effect. *g*