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[louiselux]

Because it worked for makesmewannadie...

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I notice there was no caveat against wrong or completely fucked up. So.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

There are many things wrong with Omi at this moment, Yohji thinks, his mind still slightly fogged from too much alcohol. He shouldn't be smiling at Yohji so enthuisastically, he shouldn't be wearing that, and he certainly shouldn't be confidently steering Yohji into his own bedroom.

"It can't be comfortable," Yohji finally says, wondering why anyone would want to wear a thong in that color anyway.

"Comfortable's not the point," Omi says, and his warm hands push Yohji down. Omi's mattress is soft and warm from Omi's body heat, and Yohji can smell exactly what Omi must have been up to before he started helping Yohji up the stairs.

Omi straddles him before he can protest, strips him professionally but with deliberate, teasing slowness.

Yohji is not sure how his hands end up on the bare skin of Omi's waist.

And then Omi leans down, kissing gently, mouth open, and Yohji lets one hand rise up and rest on the back of Omi's neck, smooth skin there, still so young.

Too young, too close, too--

Where did Omi learn to kiss like that?

Yohji pushed Omi back. "I'm drunk," he said.

Omi wriggled against him. "Not that drunk."

"You shouldn't," Yohji said, and damn Omi's neck felt good against the palm of his hand. "We shouldn't."

Omi's eyes were almost black in the dark. "Yohji-kun," he said, and stroked Yohji's thigh with his hand.

"No," Yohji said. "I should get back to my bed."

Omi leaned in closer, warm breath near his face, eyes so, so wide, and Omi's family was all crazy or dead and Omi jerked off alone, alone in this bedroom, alone in his life, and Yohji had definitely had way too much to drink because Omi felt so good and Yohji wanted to taste him again. "Please?"

The question undid him, and he pulled Omi close, kissed him, let Omi pull his pants down and draw slender, young fingers across his chest, down to his cock, sure grip, careful movements; had he done this before? Did Yohji want to know?

"Yohji-kun," Omi whispered against his skin, and Yohji slid his own hand into the thong, Omi's cock damp with precome, foreskin sliding in his palm, Yohji gripping tighter at the side of Omi's neck.

In the morning Omi handed him black coffee and said nothing. Yohji watched him get ready for school as he drank it, the normal, frantic bustle of morning.

"Don't break any hearts today, huh?" he teased, and Omi winked at him on the way out the door.

Not mine, kid, he thought, taking another sip. Please not mine.

Re: I notice there was no caveat against wrong or completely fucked up. So.

[permetaform]

o.o

-.-

o.o holy shit.

I never thought I'd be rooting for that pairing, damn you.


o.o

Re: I notice there was no caveat against wrong or completely fucked up. So.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Hee!

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[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Wow. Basically what permetaform said.

This is just so good. Thank you.

The Thong!

Re: I notice there was no caveat against wrong or completely fucked up. So.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Ooh, thank you!

You know he's got one. Poor lonely kid.

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[andmydog.livejournal.com]

I heart your wrong and completely fucked-up Omi and Yohji. Just so's you know and, y'know, keep writing them.

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[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

They are my fucked-up Weiss OTP and also the explanation for why Mamoru lets him go, whut.

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[briarwolf.livejournal.com]

Oh, hell. Thank you so much for linking to this. Yohji/Omi is completely my Weiss OTP, and this is so damned perfect. They're just so messed up, and so wrong, and so needing each other without really realizing it. I love this, the last lines are wonderful. ♥

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[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! They...they're awfully appealing, in a way. I think it's because Omi/Mamoru is so aggressively over-grown-up, and Yohji so childlike in ways-- his focuses on the simple pleasures, that sort of thing.

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[fuzipenguin.livejournal.com]

Wow, I've never read a Yohji/Omi before. Or I have and it was just so bad that I blocked it out. Anyway, good stuff!

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[gracelessone.livejournal.com]

ohhhh very nice ^_^ I always like to see Omi throw Youji off balance!

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[persiasecretary.livejournal.com]

Sorry, if it's going to be a double comment, I commented a few moments ago but somehow it didn't appear (yet?)

Thank you for this piece. YohjixOmi is probably my favorite, it's so nice to read anything new for the pairing. Well, I read it for the first time:D

Um, what kind of color is Omi's thong?