Fic: Seeing, R, Hakkai/Gojyo/Sanzo

[louiselux]

Happy birthday mistressrenet! Have a lovely day and here, also have a smutty ficlet.

Title: Seeing.
Pairing: Hakkai/Gojyo/Sanzo, kinda.
Rating:  R

Seeing

Hakkai was a crazy bastard. They were all sharing one room that night, but still it didn't stop him creeping over on cat's feet to Gojyo's bed and sliding under the covers.

'Hello, Gojyo,' Hakkai whispered as he settled down on top of him, pressing Gojyo into the bed with his full weight. He was damn heavy when he wanted to be. Gojyo could hear the laughter in his voice; his murmurs were loud against the soft breathing and snores of the others.

'We can't,' Gojyo hissed, wriggling under him, half appalled and half thrilled. 'Not now.'

'We can,' he said, sneaking a hand into Gojyo's underwear and making him jump. 'You'll just have to be very, very quiet, won't you?'

'But… ' and then Hakkai's hand was stroking his cock and Gojyo really had no choice but to thrust up into it and to muffle his gasps against Hakkai's hot mouth. He got his hands up under Hakkai's shirt and stroked his smooth skin and tried his best not to make any sounds. But it was hard and Hakkai's hand, with a bit of spit, was so good he could lose it like this. Hakkai was breathing heavily into his mouth and even that seemed loud in the quiet, dark room, but he was sure the others were still sleeping. Eventually Hakkai pulled back. Gojyo could see his faint outline and the gleam of his eyes and lips lit by dim moonlight.

'Do you want to come in my mouth?' Hakkai breathed in his ear, stroking him faster now.  He leaned in and nuzzled at Gojyo's neck, tasting him. Gojyo could feel his erection digging into his thigh.

Like Gojyo was going to say no to that and, really, he didn't want to waste Hakkai being in this mood. Hakkai must've understood because he kissed him hard and then was gone, to become a dim shape tenting the sheets. Left alone, Gojyo blinked into the dark and put a hand over his mouth as Hakkai's lips slid around him, clinging and wet and slippery. He reached his other hand down to touch Hakkai's hair. Crazy, yeah, but in the best way.

They were making no noise apart from the rustle of sheets and the faint, strangled gasps from Hakkai as now and then he took him too deep. Noise was very bad, because noise would wake Pissyface, also known as the World's Lightest Sleeper. He was the one they had to worry about. If Sanzo woke up and saw them, if he-- Gojyo turned his head on the pillow and looked over, because now he had to make sure and maybe some sixth sense was telling him what he was about to see. It was too quiet, too still. Something had changed.

He blinked and saw the unmistakeable gleam of another set of eyes watching him in the dark and he knew there was no way they could be Hakkai's, because of course he was under the sheets sucking him off, hard and fast and ohgod suddenly so very good. Sanzo's eyes, burning into his. He had a moment to think oh fuck and then he was coming hard. Gojyo was caught, unable to look away as Sanzo watched and then he was spurting into Hakkai's mouth, arching his back with the force of it and twisting silently in the sheets and still Sanzo watched, unreadable and unblinking and completely still, as though he were holding his breath. His mouth was open. Gojyo couldn't look away, not even when Hakkai moaned quietly and came on his stomach, hot and wet. Sanzo shut his eyes.

Then Hakkai was back with him, warm and out of breath and very happy. Gojyo got distracted after that because Hakkai kissed him, letting Gojyo taste himself. Hakkai ended up pressed into the pillow underneath him because Gojyo couldn't get enough of that and they kissed and kissed for a long time. Still, the thought of Sanzo watching like that-- it was scary. Alarming. It had turned him on even more.

'Sanzo woke up,' Gojyo warned, a little later, before Hakkai crept back to his own bed. The sky was getting lighter. Sanzo hadn't moved or done anything since and Gojyo was beginning to wonder if he'd imagined it.

He saw the wicked curve of Hakkai's lips in the dim light.

'Yes,' he said, thoughtfully and quite loudly. 'Do you know, I don't think he was ever asleep in the first place.'

Comments

[emungere.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm. Oh, the hotness. Guh. And then this:

Pissyface, also known as the World's Lightest Sleeper

And the ensuing giggle fit. *g*

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Yay! Thank you!

Pissyface didn't mind the lack of sleep, I think.

[nekonexus.livejournal.com]

guh... *purrs* lovely, lovely smut! ^__^

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it-- thank you so much!

[new-kate.livejournal.com]

oh wow. mmm yess. Lovely, gorgeously hot. Thank you!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[kintail.livejournal.com]

Oh evil! And very hot. Wow, well done.

And Happy Birthday to mistressrenet, who is very lucky to get a present like this (and I'm glad it's being shared, making us all very lucky ~_^)

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hakkai is secretly perverted. As if we didn't already know that:D

Thanks.

[karose.livejournal.com]

o.o Can I get smut for my birthday too? I'll do the puppy eyes...

Again, so lovely. I adore you.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

How can I resist the puppy eyes? *g* Any particular pairing that you'd like?

Glad you liked this, too.

[baka-gaijin.livejournal.com]

Hakkai is so f*cking hot when he's evil!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, evil!Hakkai.

Thanks!

[cicer.livejournal.com]

*flails*

Gorgeous! Very hot smut, and the last line is so perfect. Mmm. I like.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Yay! Glad you liked naughty Hakkai;-)

[hibem.livejournal.com]

Such hotness can only be articulated by strings of random consonants: sfdjhlksgl!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hee! Glad you thought so;-)

[toscas-kiss.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha! Evil!Hakkai! Don't we all just love him. :-D And teh total hotness of the story too! [beams]

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *beams back*

[scribblemoose]

OMG. *thud*

That's just so incredibly hot. Wow. ^____^

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Glad you thought so;-) Thank you!

[shirochan.livejournal.com]

Oooh Hakkai likes to be watched. <3 *glomps Hakkai* He's a tease and evil. *nods*

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hakkai's an enormous pervert under his mild exterior, I'm convinced.

Thanks!

[hungry-worm.livejournal.com]

OMFG yes!

That was very good. :D - Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

[hungry-worm.livejournal.com]

Actually, I'm currently squealy happy with Hakkai. This was so hot and amusing at the same time, and so Hakkai. Fantastic.

[jamjar.livejournal.com]

Nice, very nice. Sneaky, pushy, kinky exhibitionist Hakkai rocks.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you think so. Thank you!

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Hakkai's such a perv. Love it. Thank you so much!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

I think Sanzo appreciates it, frankly.

Glad you liked it;-)

[wordsofastory.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. That is all kinds of hot. Great story!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!

[permetaform]

'Yes,' he said, thoughtfully and quite loudly. 'Do you know, I don't think he was ever asleep in the first place.'

::giggledeath:: sneaky sneaky Hakkai and the uberhotness. BRAVA!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hee! Glad you liked it!

[nikkibyun.livejournal.com]

Hah. I hardly read fics..infact, I don't read much at all! But ohmygod you caught me. Haha. Nice! I love it! ^_________^ Eek. Why not make a Sanzo/Hakkai fic like that? Haha. X_x

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

I'm really glad you liked it! XD

[sffan.livejournal.com]

Oh *guh* so hot. Naughty Hakkai, how I love him.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

As we all do. XD

Glad you liked it;-)

[thefacelessevil.livejournal.com]

Hakkai's so kiiiiiiinky. That was PERFECTLY him! Loved it loved it. Nnngh, thank you so so much for sharing!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thanks so much.

[tiggymalvern.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love manipulative!Hakkai XD

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, he rules. *g*

Thanks!

[jibii.livejournal.com]

Omygod that was so gorgeous and perfect and kinky and Yes! Hakkai is such a kinky bastard! I love him best when he's kinky! X)

That was so hot thank you so much!

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank *you*.

I'm really glad you liked it;-)

[purkledragon.livejournal.com]

my OT3! How absolutly delightful that was.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

I have to say your icon's great, and mesmerising;-)

[aqua-eyes.livejournal.com]

Wow. So great.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

Thanks:-)

[tj-dragonblade.livejournal.com]

(laughing) Oh, indeed; and who would ever, ever suspect that quiet self-effacing always-smiling nicest-guy-in-the-world Hakkai could be such a devilish tease underneath?

And yes, I think kinky!Hakkai is perfectly canon. After all, it harks back to the original Journey on which Saiyuki is based... ^_^

Hot smut. Very. Exhibitionism/Voyeurism is always a bit of a treat.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

True - and I don't think Gonou was actually very worried by sexual taboos either, when faced with what he wanted.

Glad you liked it!

[sapphi-chan.livejournal.com]

Lovely. Pissyface hahaha. Love the way you said it.

And I do agree with tj_dragonblade.

[louiselux.livejournal.com]

I *think* Sanzo or Konzen gets called Pissyface somewhere in the manga, can't be sure though. Apparently the actual translation was 'Bhuddaface', but as Bhudda always looks pissy, it makes pefect sense.

Thanks!