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For [livejournal.com profile] irisbleu, who asked for Aziraphale/Crowley and kissing. A classic combination! Even after all this time they still make me go all melty.

Fandom: Good Omens
Pairing: Crowley/Aziraphale
Rating: kissing



They were on a park bench. Assorted wildfowl grumbled at their feet, wondering why the bread supply had suddenly dried up. Crowley could feel their incessant, simple thoughts of territory, sex, food and plumage maintenance. Aziraphale's bag of crusts lay in his lap, abandoned.

Crowley's heart thumped in time with the footsteps of passers-by he couldn't even see, all of them happily unaware of the two men sitting side by side with their lips touching, apparently frozen in place. He began to wonder if Aziraphale had nodded off.

They hadn't moved since the unthinkable had happened - between one thrown crust and the next, without plan or foresight. Aziraphale had been sitting inside the curve of Crowley's arm where it lay on the back of the bench. Crowley told himself he was just pausing to regroup before he put a stop to things. Kissing Aziraphale - what was the point of that? He could kiss anyone he wanted, anytime, anywhere. Glamour models, firemen, nubile film stars, not bookshop owners with a thing for Bibles. Not him, not the suave demon he knew himself to be. He would leap up any moment now and-- oh.

Aziraphale moved his hand to tangle his fingers in Crowley's hair, pressing gently on the back of his head to draw him closer. Crowley moved his head a little to one side and it was good, really good, having his mouth at that angle. He parted his lips. Aziraphale tasted of the cappuccino he'd had at the café. Frothy coffee he still called it. A hopelessly old-fashioned boring dusty angel, who was now making a breathy sighing noise, as if something had surprised him. Blindly, eyes shut tight, he put a hand on Aziraphale's jaw and stroked his face. He heard the gentle commotion of the café nearby and the rustle of Aziraphale's paper bag as it fell to the floor. A hand made its way up his thigh, leaving a warm imprint wherever it rested.

Presently he stopped thinking about unimportant things and thought instead about how much closer he and Aziraphale could get if they weren't on this stupid bench and how he was certain he had never, ever kissed anyone quite this hard or thoroughly before. He saw stars, pale and silvery, and at some point they managed to get home and there was more kissing, long, slow and naked, and some laughter.

Later, leaning forehead to forehead, breathing heavily against each other with eyes open and fully aware, he'd forgotten he wasn't supposed to want this.
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Date: 2004-10-27 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daegaer.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely. Just lovely.

A hopelessly old-fashioned boring dusty angel, who was now making a breathy sighing noise, as if something had surprised him.

This is just so sweet!

Date: 2004-10-27 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you!

I think what really happened was that Crowley couldn't stand to watch Aziraphale feed the ducks a moment longer.

Date: 2004-10-27 03:34 am (UTC)
enigel: Aziraphale shielding Crawly under his wing (Aziraphale fairly happy (me))
From: [personal profile] enigel
Even after all this time they still make me go all melty.

You and me both... This is entirely wonderful and sweet. You have the knack of creating an atmosphere of warm intimacy and I love your style.

Date: 2004-10-27 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!

Date: 2004-10-27 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noirenails.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* Lovely, sweet, and very delicious :) I love it so much it makes me feel very warm, and now it's quite cold both outside and inside the house...

Date: 2004-10-27 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Brrr - glad this helped:) Thanks for your lovely fb.

Date: 2004-10-27 05:14 am (UTC)
ext_13979: (Borgia)
From: [identity profile] ajodasso.livejournal.com
You mind-reader, you ;) Beautiful and, dare I say it, ethereal?

*ducks the demon*

Date: 2004-10-27 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Yay, you liked! That makes me very happy indeed.



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Date: 2004-10-27 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millefiori.livejournal.com
Oh, this is lovely!! (And this coming from someone who *still* hasn't managed to lay hands on a copy of Good Omens.)

I'm saving this to memories so I can come back to it and be cheered when angst gets me down. Thank you for sharing it!

Date: 2004-10-27 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hey, thank you - that's lovely to hear. I'm so glad it cheered you up, even if you've never read it. GO is a great book - you won't regret it.

Date: 2004-10-27 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tropes.livejournal.com
Oh, this is beautiful. <3

Date: 2004-10-27 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hey, thanks:)

Date: 2004-10-27 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] argyleheir.livejournal.com
Ooh, that was lovely & really a rather perfect antidote to the freezing rain that's currently falling outside my window.

He began to wonder if Aziraphale had nodded off.

Hee. ^^

Date: 2004-10-27 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Good! I'm very pleased it warmed you up a bit.

Date: 2004-10-27 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queeniefox.livejournal.com
Brilliant. :)

Date: 2004-10-27 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee. Thanks!

Date: 2004-10-27 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penknife.livejournal.com
Aww! Lovely and sweet.

Date: 2004-10-27 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! (and thanks for the rec, too:)

Date: 2004-10-27 06:22 am (UTC)
sophistry: (soho - a dingy little bookshop)
From: [personal profile] sophistry
Oh, this is utterly gorgeous. Especially the 'frothy coffee'. Perfect.

Date: 2004-10-27 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked the frothy coffee - it's my favourite bit. Thank you!

Date: 2004-10-27 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfbystarlight.livejournal.com
Aww... that was lovely. Just the right mix of want and internal confusion. I just walked home in an absolute downpour and this thoroughly cheered me up. :)

Date: 2004-10-27 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thanks! I don't think they knew what they were doing, but they were determined to do it anyway.

Date: 2004-10-27 07:16 am (UTC)
ext_3190: Red icon with logo "I drink Nozz-a-la- Cola" in cursive. (catchmefall)
From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
*melts*

I'd rather read kissingfics than smut, really. There's something that's almost more intimate about a kiss. *g*

Reading this made me feel better about going to work sick.

Date: 2004-10-27 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad it helped - but you should stay at home if you're sick! *g*

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Date: 2004-10-27 07:23 am (UTC)
ext_12944: (lightbulb)
From: [identity profile] delirieuse.livejournal.com
Holy f---.

I was just starting to lose interest in this pairing in a major way.

I'll be mogadored.

Date: 2004-10-27 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee. Thanks!

Date: 2004-10-27 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liar-xx.livejournal.com
So sweet and wibble-inducing ^^

Date: 2004-10-27 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Wibbles are good:) Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2004-10-27 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mackzazzle.livejournal.com
Pretty slashy kisses always cheer me up, and this is the best kind. Yay!

Date: 2004-10-27 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Slashy kisses are defintely the best kind! Glad it cheered you up:)

So Sweet

Date: 2004-10-27 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aramuin.livejournal.com
That is just beautiful.

I love the mood and the emotion behind it. I like the whole "I CAN'T be kissing Aziraphale...I kiss anyone and everyone and it doesn't mean anything....really, it doesn't!" panic.

Wonderful.

Re: So Sweet

Date: 2004-10-27 08:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hey, thank you! I think Crowley likes to think he can kiss anyone he likes, to fortify his own self image as a playboy, but I don't think he ever quite gets round to it. Until now.

Date: 2004-10-27 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alpheratz.livejournal.com
Oh, such lovely kissing. <3 I love the mood here, wistful and sweet.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!

Date: 2004-10-27 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunarennui.livejournal.com
nnnnnnngh.

beautiful. yes.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks!

Date: 2004-10-27 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorchar.livejournal.com
Oh, this is wonderful. So much emotion in a kiss.

Date: 2004-10-27 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prurient-badger.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely, totally lovely.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
I love your name!

And thank you *g*

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Date: 2004-10-27 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaytee4ever.livejournal.com
he was certain he had never, ever kissed anyone quite this hard or thoroughly before. He saw stars, pale and silvery, and at some point they managed to get home and there was more kissing, long, slow and naked, and some laughter.

*whimpersmelts* god. so. sweet. just. sweet. yummy.


Later, leaning forehead to forehead, breathing heavily against each other with eyes open and fully aware, he'd forgotten he wasn't supposed to want this.

*grins* heh. right, sure, wasn't supposed to want that. *G*


*huuugs* thanks for the good melty sweet fic :)

Date: 2004-10-28 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you! Lovely comments! *hugs*

Date: 2004-10-27 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovelyzelda.livejournal.com
Hooray!

Crowley could feel their incessant, simple thoughts of territory, sex, food and plumage maintenance.
For some reason I immediately thought of how this could apply to Aziraphale and Crowley...

Glamour models, firemen, nubile film stars, not bookshop owners with a thing for Bibles.
I like that "firemen" is in there--as if Crowley's taken the sex life he's supposed to have from various pin-up calenders.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
For some reason I immediately thought of how this could apply to Aziraphale and Crowley...

Yes - their four basic needs in life.

I like that "firemen" is in there--as if Crowley's taken the sex life he's supposed to have from various pin-up calenders.

Exactly. I don't think he really ever kisses anyone at all, just likes to think he could if he wanted.

Date: 2004-10-27 02:52 pm (UTC)
ext_20798: (RGjess79)
From: [identity profile] tabula-x-rasa.livejournal.com
Got here from [livejournal.com profile] muffinbutt. This was sweet and lovely and charming! I'm adding to memories.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hey, thank you!

Date: 2004-10-27 08:39 pm (UTC)
ext_14419: the mouse that wants Arthur's brain (Default)
From: [identity profile] derien.livejournal.com
mmm, yum. just right - sweet, dorky and delicious. thank you for writing this.

Date: 2004-10-28 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks!

Date: 2004-10-28 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreya-uberwald.livejournal.com
So beautifully sweet. Love Crowley's, ineviably futile, internal battle over the whole thing.

Crowley could feel their incessant, simple thoughts of territory, sex, food and plumage maintenance.

Hee, that line cracked me up - never mind the ducks it could decribe approximately half the people I know in RL.

Date: 2004-10-28 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
never mind the ducks it could decribe approximately half the people I know in RL.

Hee. hehehehe. Actually, yes, it does, doesn't it?

Thank you!
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