Most of what I'd been planning to say about this has been said already. But I might as well repeat some of it, and just try to cut down on the words.
Your portrayal of Feli is great. Makes a fantastic change from the more... I guess, two dimensional guy we see in some fics, where he's more just the pretty cardboard cutout boy.
Rafa was gorgeous in this, as always. You really worked him out, I think, all his thoughts and feelings. You were so in his head, it's remarkable.
The sex, oh the sex. Hot as. And made all the hotter with Rafa thinking about Roger, and Feli knowing it. Oooh, yes.
Also, "It made me want him all the more. I mean, the win.? LOL, win.
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Date: 2009-01-28 03:49 pm (UTC)Your portrayal of Feli is great. Makes a fantastic change from the more... I guess, two dimensional guy we see in some fics, where he's more just the pretty cardboard cutout boy.
Rafa was gorgeous in this, as always. You really worked him out, I think, all his thoughts and feelings. You were so in his head, it's remarkable.
The sex, oh the sex. Hot as. And made all the hotter with Rafa thinking about Roger, and Feli knowing it. Oooh, yes.
Also, "It made me want him all the more. I mean, the win.?
LOL, win.
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