god i just have to comment again because now i'm home and i've read it once more. it's so beautiful. i have a couple of favorite lines:
"Oh, God," Roger said. He slid his hands down further, smoothing down over his ass and then staying there. "Oh, God."
this just killed me. it's like, you could feel it in your gut how much he wants rafa. gaah.
Roger's hands pushed up under the legs of his shorts at the back, sliding up to grope between his thighs.
ohmygod just actually PICTURE that. it's like... the hottest thing ever. jesus christ.
and the trust between them, and how rafa could feel the belt on him at random moments. ohgodd. i wish you could be in my brain and write stories for me to enjoy all day while i'm at work and hating life. hahaha. <3
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Date: 2008-08-26 11:52 pm (UTC)"Oh, God," Roger said. He slid his hands down further, smoothing down over his ass and then staying there. "Oh, God."
this just killed me. it's like, you could feel it in your gut how much he wants rafa. gaah.
Roger's hands pushed up under the legs of his shorts at the back, sliding up to grope between his thighs.
ohmygod just actually PICTURE that. it's like... the hottest thing ever. jesus christ.
and the trust between them, and how rafa could feel the belt on him at random moments. ohgodd. i wish you could be in my brain and write stories for me to enjoy all day while i'm at work and hating life. hahaha. <3