Date: 2006-09-15 12:32 am (UTC)
Wow. I'm in awe of your writing ability.

The flow of this story just fits perfectly with Hakkai and Gojyo. Hakkai's gentle-seeming introspection vs. Gojyo's in-your-face presence... wow. Now I'd love to see a continuation of this... like what happened when they got back to Hakkai's place. How Hakkai handled Mr. Sato. Buying and giving Gojyo a new collar. (actually, that's my perversion... Gojyo in a collar. I particularly enjoyed that detail of this piece.)

As always, wonderful. I love this one so much... the richness and the details astound me. Thank you for sharing.
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