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Friday - always a good time for random smut.

Fandom: Saiyuki
Pairing: Hakkai/Gojyo
Warnings: R for stealing Sanzo's underwear.
Notes: um...

He wants to see your Underwear




'Won't he miss 'em?'

'Not at all. He's got plenty of spares,' said Hakkai.

'It's too small,' Gojyo said, as he wriggled into clingy black fabric.

Hakkai stood back a bit. He seemed to be concentrating very hard. 'No. No, it's not,' he said. He gave Gojyo a thorough, lingering once over. 'It's perfect.'

Gojyo frowned, then looked down at himself. He smoothed out the wrinkles in his long gloves and adjusted the metal rings on his fingers

'Are you sure?'

Hakkai nodded. 'Mmmm.'

'These armbands pinch like fuck,' he said, more to himself than Hakkai. 'How the hell does he stand it?'

He plucked at the high neck, settling it to be more comfortable under his chin. If he was honest, this stuff was amazing: soft and stretchy and a lot better quality than anything Gojyo usually wore. He ran a hand down his chest. It really was tight, not that he needed telling; he'd seen Sanzo's nipples enough times when the monk insisted on lounging about in chilly hotel rooms in his underwear. He grinned to himself and then he looked up, to be caught by Hakkai's expression.

Their eyes met, then suddenly Gojyo dropped the smile, put on a deep scowl and stalked closer, putting a bit of sway into it like Sanzo did when he was seriously pissed off. Hakkai's eyes widened and he backed off a step. Gojyo kept up with him until Hakkai's shoulders hit the wall.

'So,' Gojyo said, slapping his palms flat on the wall either side of Hakkai's head, trapping him. He leaned in, making his voice low and soft, 'you're interested in our Sanzo-sama?'

Hakkai tilted his chin up and gave a tiny smile. 'Ah-- Gojyo, what are you saying?'

'Well, I know you didn't persuade me to wear this stuff for my own personal comfort. You're not gonna try and play innocent with me, are you? Why did you dress me up like this?'

'It just looks very good on you,' Hakkai offered.

Gojyo ignored him. Instead he pressed up close and put his lips to Hakkai's ear.

'He treats you different to us. You know that. I wonder what he really thinks about you.'

'Nothing very good. I don't know,' said Hakkai.

If he was trying to sound nonchalant he was failing.

'I do,' Gojyo whispered. Hakkai tensed against him. 'I bet he strips you naked every night in his head. I bet he thinks about bending you over the bed like that.'

'Gojyo, ' Hakkai breathed.

Gojyo pressed his face to Hakkai's neck and breathed in the smell of his hair, putting an arm tight round his waist. Hakkai arched against him and made a soft noise in his throat.

'Or maybe he's the one who wants to get bent over, with you on top,' Gojyo said. 'Yeah, that's what he wants. Even if he doesn't, you'd give it to him, right?'

Hakkai gave a soft throaty growl and put a hand to his throat and began to tug open his shirt.

'You can fuck me like this,' Gojyo said. 'Just like you want to fuck Sanzo. Close your eyes. You can touch him.'

'Yes,' Hakkai said, so quiet it was little more than a breath and then his hands were on Gojyo, sliding up the black-clad length of his arm, tracing the tight grip of the metal bands, over bare upper arms and to his throat and the high neck.

'Ah-- just as long you don't want to play Goku,' Gojyo added.

He thought Hakkai might laugh. Instead Hakkai opened his eyes and stared at him, his face perfectly serious. Gojyo shivered.

'No. I want to be me,' said Hakkai. 'Me with you.'

He slid his fingers down Gojyo's stomach and closed them suddenly hard and tight around the bulge in Gojyo's jeans.

'Well, mostly you,' Hakkai said, with a little laugh. 'Now, get on the bed. Sanzo.'

Date: 2005-07-22 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
OMFGsanzo!underwear!fetishhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Ahem. I meant to compliment you on your fine taste and writing. Yes. I think that must have been it... I can't quite confirm with my mind, as it is firmly located in the gutter and resists all attempts to return.

Date: 2005-07-23 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
If you see my brain down there, will you send it home? Underwear!Gojyo seems to have taken up permanent residence.

Glad you enjoyed it;)

Date: 2005-07-22 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com
::thud:: Oh, that was diabolical. Gojyou in Sanzou-gear melts my brain. Just, guh.

Date: 2005-07-23 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks so much. Dressed up Gojyo is hotter than a very hot thing-- I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-07-22 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisa-bee.livejournal.com
brain!splode

Mmmm. Would comment, but mind is going "wheeeeee" and spinning around with the idea of Gojyo in that ridiculously attractive bodysuit...

Date: 2005-07-23 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Mmmm, Gojyo. He really is fun to dress up...

Glad you enjoyed it;)

Date: 2005-07-22 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cygny.livejournal.com
I sort of agree with all previous posters :D

Date: 2005-07-22 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tochira.livejournal.com
Bwaha, ditto. XD XD XD and icon love!

Date: 2005-07-23 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks;)

Date: 2005-07-23 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Bwah! Glad you liked it. XD

ps much love for that icon!

Date: 2005-07-22 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hibem.livejournal.com
'Ah-- just as long you don't want to play Goku,' Gojyo added.

:snickerdeath: Sounds like Gojyo's the one with the secret dirty fantasy life. Surprise, surprise.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
I'm glad that line made you laugh-- it made me snigger far too much when I thought of it. And yeah, Gojyo's not exactly the shy retiring type where sex is concerned.

Thanks - glad you liked it;)

Date: 2005-07-22 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emungere.livejournal.com
Y'know, I was going to attempt to accomplish things today, but that was before I was a small, melty puddle on floor. Instead, I think I will just reread obsessively and picture Gojyo scowling and swaying like Sanzo. Nnnngh. Hawt.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
And hours later, Sanzo realises what's happening and kicks their bedroom door down in a towering rage, only to be confronted with the hotness...

Sorry for puddlising you (only not really), but I was forced to write this after a comment you left recently. Gojyo is persistant, you know. XD

Very glad you liked it!

Date: 2005-07-24 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emungere.livejournal.com
Pfft. Do not try to blame this on me! I merely asked an innocent question. Gojyo stealing Sanzo's undies was totally your idea. And a very good idea it was, too.

Heee. Poor Sanzo. Underwear stolen, rage derailed by the sight of naked Hakkai curled around mostly naked but for holy underwear Gojyo. And then he tries to get the underwear back, and his day becomes even more interesting very quickly. :)

Date: 2005-07-24 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Oh well, not blame but inspiration! *g*

And then he tries to get the underwear back,

OMG! Half naked wrestling on the bed! Excuse me while I drool. Sanzo wouldn't stand a chance.

Date: 2005-07-24 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emungere.livejournal.com
Hee. No, no he wouldn't. He might even smile afterwards!

Date: 2005-07-22 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daegaer.livejournal.com
Ooooh. Naughty Hakkai and Wicked Gojyo! Niiiiiice.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! I keep trying to think of Hakkai as something other than a complete pervert, but it's not working. Oh well. XD

Thanks - glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2005-07-22 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] longsunday.livejournal.com
'Ah-- just as long you don't want to play Goku,' Gojyo added.
...
'No. I want to be me,' said Hakkai. 'Me with you.'


omg. fikrst, i snickered like the demented teenager i shall always be, then just melted into tiny pieces of myself. how do you do that with like, two lines? MYSTERY. but pls continue doing so. :)

Date: 2005-07-23 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
That's really nice feedback, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it;)

Date: 2005-07-22 06:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scribblemoose
Fuck me. I want to commission a picture of that so, so much. Would you mind if I did? Feel free to say no. I just...

damn, that's hot and funny and wonderful and exactly what I needed. ::glomps::

Date: 2005-07-23 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
I'm *very* glad you enjoyed it-- thank you. *hugs*

And if you wanted to get art done for this that would be absolutely wonderful! I wish I could draw it myself, but sadly I'm just not that good.

Date: 2005-07-26 08:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scribblemoose
Me neither. But I'd love to see what PL Nunn would make of it. :)

Date: 2005-07-22 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karose.livejournal.com
...And then Sanzo gets this here set back after the next laundry day, and wonders why it's stretched. And worries that he's putting on weight.

And then I get distracted thinking of the beats in this again and just sort of shiver happily. Mmm. Thank you ever so much.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Bwaha!

'Goku!'

'Huh?'

'Do I look fat in this?!'

'Huh?'

And thank *you* for the comment- I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karose.livejournal.com
I always enjoy your work; you should know that! You're one of those authors that always makes me depressed about my own work in contrast. Damn you, you're too good.

And now imagine the carnage if someone actually answered 'yes' to Sanzo's question. Though really, the only one in a position to say so is our even-sticklier bishop...

Date: 2005-07-23 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Aww, stop! You're really too kind. You write all manner of amazing things all the time.

Hee hee! Hazel would be all smug in his size 6 robes and Sanzo would be so angry, yet unable to shoot him. Hakkai would probably organise a waist measuring session.

Date: 2005-07-23 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karose.livejournal.com
No, that's what you do. I just have words. Very accidental ones. You, on the other hand, give me interesting dreams at night.

But who would conduct the measuring? Can't imagine Gojyo doing it without enough indecent touching to be criminal...

Date: 2005-07-23 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Dreams! That's very cool. XD

Sanzo would have fits if Gojyo touched him there! Hakkai could do the measuring, but then I don't think he'd be above copping a few sneaky feels too while he was there.

Date: 2005-07-22 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akisawana.livejournal.com
HAWT
and then 'No. I want to be me,' said Hakkai. 'Me with you.' and it's sweet, and then it goes back to the HAWT.

Date: 2005-07-23 09:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Cool-- I'm so pleased you think so.

Glad you liked it!

Date: 2005-07-24 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shirochan.livejournal.com
*boggled*

...

*still boggled*

That was hot. Damn. Sanzo, Gojyo and hakkai go too well together. Damn. *speechless*

*still boggled*

Date: 2005-07-24 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! Very glad you like this!

Date: 2005-07-25 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildelamassu.livejournal.com
Once again, no coherent comment. Guh.

Date: 2005-07-25 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Very glad you enjoyed it;-)

Date: 2009-02-03 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixie-blade.livejournal.com
i ummm...i think my brain broke...*wipes drool away*

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