Unfortunate sounds - there are not enough of these in fanfic, I feel. This sort of advice is really helpful - trying to conjure up that sense of reality is important I think, because it makes it all the more hot that the characters are loving it even despite the random distractions, elbows in the ribs and weird smells.
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Date: 2008-12-31 12:11 pm (UTC)