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For [livejournal.com profile] puddingcat, who asked for the Saiyuki/Batman AU, five years earlier.

Five years earlier

"Why are you dressed as a bat?" the man on the floor said.

His voice was as coolly enquiring as a doctor's, except that this man's business had nothing to do with saving lives. Not so far.

"Why the hell do you care?" Sanzo said. He didn’t have time. He never did. It was between him and the bats. "Shut up and let me rescue you."

Wide eyes looked up through a fringe of lank, dirty hair.

"All right," the man said, his voice as soft as a sigh. "That would be nice."

His eyes drifted shut as he spoke and his head lolled to one side. He was lying in a pool of blood. Not a big pool, and not his own. Sanzo swore, then scooped him up, feeling his hands slide in sticky cold fluid as he heaved him over his shoulder. He was far heavier than he looked. Sanzo staggered and then picked up the pace; shouting voices were coming closer, bouncing shrill echoes off the cave walls.

Hands twisted in his cape, too hard.

"But why?"

Sanzo was glad he didn't have to reply.


***

There had been a sound, Sanzo was sure of it. He sat straight up in bed, then realised he was clutching at the bed clothes. He let go.

"Goku?" he said, in a low voice, even though he knew Goku was away at school. Stupid.

The door to his room creaked open. Sanzo had the odd feeling that he should have known that it would be Hakkai.

"What's wrong?"

Hakkai didn't answer, he just came closer, right to the bed, then stood there, not blinking, his hands resting on the bedspread. Sanzo had sat at the kitchen table and watched him bake a cake this morning. He'd seemed almost normal, even if he had thrown the cake away before Sanzo could eat any.

Hakkai pulled back the covers and got in beside him, close enough for Sanzo to feel the brush of his arm and the chill of his feet under the blankets.

“You’re not awake,” Sanzo said, mostly to himself.

“No,” Hakkai mumbled. “Not yet.”

His eyes were open but unseeing, then, little by little, they closed.

***

"So," Hakkai said, wrapping his arms across his chest.

He could never get warm enough in this house. The walls of Sanzo's underground workshop were bare and the place smelled of damp plaster. Sanzo sat on a wooden chair and sipped coffee, flicking glances at Hakkai from the corner of his eye, like a watchful cat.

"What do you want?" Sanzo said.

Hakkai cleared his throat and let his shoulders fall back.

"I'm well now, thanks to you."

Sanzo was always so very spiky, like a porcupine. Or perhaps one of those poisonous spiny fish, or perhaps …

"And?"

Hakkai took a breath. "And you no longer need a wanted criminal under your roof."

"And?"

Hakkai smiled. Sanzo could be very tiresome.

"I'm going to hand myself over to the police."

From somewhere upstairs came the faint thunder of Goku leaping down the staircase three at a time, just as if he had never been told not to. Sanzo lowered his coffee cup, then held it out.

"I need a refill," he said.


***


for [livejournal.com profile] mistressrenet, set three months earlier, and [livejournal.com profile] hibem, who wanted more of Goku and his friend Nat

Three months earlier

"His voice is so awesome," said Goku, flopping back on his bed as music filled the room.

His carelessly flung-out arm brushed again Nat’s hip and how could a simple thing like that make him shiver all over? Goku’s eyes fluttered shut. Sunlight was struggling through the cracks in the tightly drawn curtains and a beam fell across Goku's cheek. Gojyo's low voice surrounded them.

There was a poster of him on the wall, wearing tight black jeans and nothing else. He was posed on his knees, which were spread really a long way apart. It was new.

“Cool poster,” he mumbled.

"Yeah," Goku said, rolling over onto his stomach. He propped his chin in one palm. "What’s wrong?”

It was always like this He couldn’t seem to hide anything from Goku and it terrified him.

“So Sanzo. You’re his ward, right?” Nat said, picking at the bedspread. If they talked about this they would have to talk about-— other stuff. “What does that even mean?”

Nat could almost hear Goku’s brain turning over. He didn’t look like he knew the answer to that. Their gazes locked and held and Nat struggled to breathe normally. He loved coming here. He did. He loved the mystery of this rambling house, of Sanzo and his permanent bad mood, even the weirdo butler with the creepy smile. Better not mess it up by blurting out something stupid.

“I dunno,” Goku said.

“Does it mean he’s, like, your dad?”

He wasn’t anything like Nat’s father, which had to be a good thing.

“Umm. Not really,” Goku said, slowly, flopping onto his back again. He looked thoughtful now, and his gaze strayed over to the poster of Gojyo. “He’s too freaky for that.”

“Freaky like how? Not bad freaky?”

Goku shook his head and smiled at him. It was dazzling in the dim light.

“Nah. I’ll tell you some day.”

Date: 2007-02-06 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kispexi2.livejournal.com
Very nice. The first one in particular made me smile. I really like your eccentric details. And the way they mean something.

Date: 2007-02-06 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] new-kate.livejournal.com
*flails* yaaaaaay! Ah, I love this AU so. BatSanzo is awesome in so many ways.

Date: 2007-02-06 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daegaer.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this AU! Sanzo's so Sanzoish, even when dressed as a bat!

Date: 2007-02-06 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puddingcat.livejournal.com
Eeeee, BatSan! (even if that sounds more like toilet cleaner than the pun it was intended to be.) Hakkai's gorgeously creepy, too :)

These are lovely, thanks!

Date: 2007-02-06 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com
Oh my! I love the first for Hakkai. i like how Gojyo's so deliciously in the second without really being.

*Aah!* - can go to bed happy now! Nighty night!

Date: 2007-02-06 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emungere.livejournal.com
Oh, Goku and Nat. ♥ Adorable!

Date: 2007-02-06 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hibem.livejournal.com
Wah, this is so, so perfect. :whimper:

Date: 2007-02-06 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wedjateye.livejournal.com
Batsmut (even without any actual smut) always makes me smile. Now I'm kicking myself for not requesting some in your timestamp meme, not that this isn't wonderful but I'm greedy for even more.

The voices in the second piece are wonderful - brimming with feelings constrained by the relative inarticulateness of the adolescent male.

which were spread really a long way apart

in particular sounded just like I'd expect a teenage boy to think/talk. The great visual of Gojyo was perfect too.

I like this fic universe so much I'd love icons for it.

Date: 2007-02-07 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cicer.livejournal.com
Eeee, socute! I love Bat!Sanzo so much, and always giggle and the mental image of his costume. Goku is ubercute here too. Awww.

Date: 2007-02-07 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dusk-eyed.livejournal.com
*Big grin* Fantastic pieces, both, but my favorite was the first. Sanzo and Hakkai are still so them and it all works. I love this au. :)

Date: 2007-02-07 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. :) I do work hard to get the eccentric details in, so am very glad you approve.

Date: 2007-02-07 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
*hugs* So glad you like it!

Date: 2007-02-07 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hoorah! Yes, Sanzo is used to wearing strange outfits...

Date: 2007-02-07 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Hee! BatSan!

Thanks, glad you enjoyed them.

Date: 2007-02-07 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I'm glad Gojyo as the third person in that room came across - he was very much intended to be a presence in that scene.

Date: 2007-02-07 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! Oh, teenage mutant youkai romance!

Date: 2007-02-07 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you :)

Date: 2007-02-07 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm particularly pleased to hear you like the second one. So glad you liked that visual image of Gojyo - I wanted it to come across vividly.

I'd love icons for it too! Hmmm. I wonder who we can bribe to make them?

Date: 2007-02-07 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Bat Sanzo - I imagine him in the moulded plastic version, a la those films with-- damn, can't remember his name. Micheal Keaton. Imagining him in the old fashioned tights and underpants is quite amusing though.

Date: 2007-02-07 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thanks very much indeed. I'm very glad the characterisation comes through.

Date: 2007-02-07 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wedjateye.livejournal.com
I loved both of them - just realised my comment wasn't really clear on that point - I really enjoyed the details like the cake and Hakkai getting into bed in the first. I was particularly struck by the voices in the second piece which is why I blathered on about them.

I'd icon if I could. I know you already have giftart for this series. Sadly I lack the skills and talent. :-( If anyone else volunteers though, I'd love to use the end results if you were happy to share. Bat!Sanzo really needs an icon.

Date: 2007-02-09 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com
Goku and Nat are just a world of hot and innocent and awesome. And Hakkai is so very freaky in any incarnation.

Date: 2007-02-14 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stalkerbunny.livejournal.com
*is killed by the goodness of the writing x_x* Damn, that happens every time. Ectoplasmic fingers are just no good for typing... Scary/freaky Hakkai is always so interesting...and...Your Sanzo who won't bother to explain things is just so himself. The second one was also lovely.

Date: 2007-02-15 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you liked the Goku and Nat one.

Hakkai is just a world of strange.

Date: 2007-02-15 11:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com
I think Sanzo resents having to make the effort of explaining things. *g*

Glad you liked them!

Date: 2007-11-14 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saiyuki-ikkou-1.livejournal.com
How did I miss this post??

I love the backstories. And the fact that Goku thinks that Gojyo is so sexy/hot/cool. I'm sure the "journey to the west" Goku and Gojyo would both be appalled and horrified at this turn in their relationship. XD

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