ext_170730 ([identity profile] lauand.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] louiselux 2008-05-28 11:00 am (UTC)

That was a very interesting post. I've always wondered how you and Emungere managed to write together and obtain such stunningly good results, so I'm glad you covered that part.

The explanation about the sex scenes was fascinating, too. For me (as for most women, as you mentioned), the emotional component is vital. Even in kinky sex, where the kink is nearly enough to make the sex worthwhile, it's always better when I can see some glimpses of emotion, because actions in themselves get boring. There are a limited number of sex positions and we get to a point where we have read them all. But with you and Emungere's writing I never get bored, there's always a compulsion to read more, a need to read more. Because your sex scenes are more than hot, they are hooking. And the very best part (at least for me), is that it never falls into sap. There are feelings, emotions, sensations and relationship balances/unbalances, but it doen't become too sugary even if it sometimes become too intense emotionally speaking. I think that's real talent, as I've already mentioned to you and/or Emungere.

I'll be sure to take a look to that "tutorial" you gave us a link of. I've got quite the complex when writing sex, so any help is welcome.

All in all, thanks for this post, it was most interesting.

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