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louiselux ([personal profile] louiselux) wrote2008-03-30 11:09 pm
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Losing the plot

Arrgh, my story!

I do not know what is happening next in it, and it's extremely vexing and frightening. I just have to keep on going through this difficult part and hope it comes out right. I just rewrote a huge chunk of it today and don't want to have to backtrack again. I have all these words and I just need to jiggle them around till they make sense. Possibly I should go and do my ironing and not worry about it anymore tonight. *takes a deep breath*

Recently, I was telling [livejournal.com profile] emungerethat I never thought about transitions in stories and that they seemed to happen easily. Predictably, transitions are now laughing in my face and refusing to cooperate. How many times can I have a character fall asleep and wake up as a way to move the story forward? So far it's happened about four times. Gahh. Transition-fu, I do not have it.

[identity profile] louiselux.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, I don't know about that! I do love having multiple and changing POVs, but this particular one is from one POV only. Which you think would be easier but actually is harder than I thought it would be.

[identity profile] kispexi2.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I think single POVs can be really hard if you're trying to tell more than one side of a story.