Not at all! In fact I'm sure I could - should - have been more detailed, but then the story took me over and I went racing on ahead.

Faltering, not-quite-perfect sex is so much more real than Fabulous Foreplay followed by Awesome Orgasm, IMO, because it leaves space for the emotional connection. I thought you hit it spot on.

Before I go, I ought to add I loved Sanzo in this. But then again, I love Sanzo in anything!