ext_13146 ([identity profile] nekonexus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] louiselux 2005-12-11 06:45 pm (UTC)

*^_^* *purrrs*

so, it would be easy to wibble and melt and gush about how freakin' hot that was. Because it was. ^_^ But in the effort of increasing my level of useful feedback, I'll also say a couple other things.

1 - Sanzo - "I'm straight" -- yes, yes, we know, Bruce. ^_~ But you do know that it's the ones who protest the loudest who are most often pegged as closet gays, right? Thought so. *smirk* Just so we're all clear on that.

2 - Gojyo and Hakkai. The dynamic = yes, exactly. Creepy Hakkai, because man, they just met, and all he's done is heal the guy, but you can't fight karma/fate/the tangled skein of their lives and so of course, of course it's going to click and then leave them both reeling trying to figure it out afterwards. ^_^ It's really well done, right down to the little details of neat-freak-ish-ness (clean up first, then snuggle) and everything.

and 3 - finger sucking while fucking = love. ^_^ It's one of those things that just draws the brain in and confuses the senses and makes it all that much more intense. Yeah. Well done. ^_^

*melts into a puddle with the rest of the fanbois*

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